Following is a RTI application I prepared. Please help me by giving your comment.
Ref. No: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
APPLICATION U/S. 6(1) FOR SEEKING INFORMATION UNDER THE
RIGHTS TO INFORMATION ACT, 2005
(TAMIL NADU GOVERNMENT)
The Public Information Officer,
U/s 6(1) of RTI Act, 2005 certain information are required regarding the noting found in the photocopy received from you as enclosure along with Roc.No.xxxxx/2008/TPI dated 07.07.2009 pertaining to Mr. xxxxxxxxxxxx.
Regarding the construction of the commercial/public building in the Re-Survey number xx/75-1B, xxxxxxxxx Municipality by the person in the subject matter, the xxxxxxxxxxx Municipality has supplied various information under the RTI Act, 2005 in its letters on different days which contain certain contradictory, incomplete, misleading, false and incorrect details and information. The responsible public officers have probably forgotten the sections 36, 37, 108, 119, 166, 167, 176, 177, 182, 201, 202, 203, 204, 218, 219, 463, 464, 465, 466, 469, 471 and 503 of IPC too. This situation necessitated to get the following information pertaining to the above matter U/s 6(1) of RTI Act, 2005. In this application the word “document” has the same meaning as in section 29 of IPC.
1. I understand that the person in the subject matter had applied before the xxxxxxxxxxxxx municipality with a plan for approval some time around 20.04.2009. Is that true?
2. Please provide the certified copies of the following, which are mentioned in the document of the subject matter, with all noting found on it on all pages as on today (the day of dispatch of this information):
a) The Plan
b) The Application and other connected papers submitted along with the plan.
c) All documents whether past or current pertaining to the subject matter sent to any other/superior public authority.
d) All documents whether past or current pertaining to the subject matter received from any other/superior public authority.
e) All documents pertaining to the subject matter sent or returned to the person in the subject matter.
f) All documents pertaining to the subject matter received from the person in the subject matter.
g) All file noting regarding the subject matter.
The information sought for is required to be supplied in printed form.